Reviews for More Important Than Any Broomstick |
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![]() ![]() Nice story, neat work on working around the main plot points of the original. Loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I personally would leave the time frame canon but use the currant tech by using the AU excuse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this work! Actually in Harry Potter (the J. K. Rowling one's) there is one thing that frustrated me A LOT: constant disputes the three main characters from the 3rd book (first real fight being the one of this story, cause of A BROOMSTICK!). So i really like that for once, Harry think a little and realize just how a prat he could be to Hermione here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully you get five detentions, but instead of having to do dumb shit with rat eyes, someone cuts your eyes out and makes you serve detention with them. Seriously. Stupid fucking retard. Why can't one of you stupid fucking retarded brain dead moronic authors ever have a god damned fanfiction without having the teachers ignore such fucking bullshit? Go fuck yourself, bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First try at reading a Harry/Hermione multi chaptered story, and it was really good :) You did an amazing job with this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Love Harmony and your take on it. Thanks so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, I get it isn't meant to be a serious story, and that you have probably long stopped paying attention to it, but Snape could never get away with punishments like that in the great hall. Other teachers would step in and punish Malfoy, and shield Hermione if nothing else. They'd probably agree with Harry's punishment I suppose though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been meaning to ask, what do you think would happen if Rovert (Trevor backward, thus the name of Neville's toad Patronus) managed to get into a Dementor's mouth? I would think BOOM. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They might be letting Ronoff too easy. One of his major flaws is that disconnect between his brain and mouth. Still, his confession has a ring of truth. TGM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice follow up. Ron is in form and no wonder that the Twins pranked him. Sadly, when they apologize, Harry will have 4 more Snape detentions. Ginny Fred and George will come around and it’s still hard to see anyone tolerating Ron now. Revenge will be sweet (and likely funny). TGM |
![]() ![]() ![]() More than a good start. This is the way PoA should have gone. Hermione made sense and Harry had the maturity to listen. I’m a Harmonian, so for this to lead to a relationship has me cheering. Her reply to Malfoy was classic. In canon he was never a match for her verbally. I hope at the end of the year she still gets to wallop him. This IS the canon Ron, which makes JKR’s putting them together all the more inexplicable. He is irredeemable, and remain that entirely through canon. One hopes that the Twins, Neville, and his Quidditch mates at the least will back them. It’s hard in fact to find anyone who’ll even stay friendly with him. TGM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story |