Reviews for Perfect Failure
Rindiny chapter 2 . 12/15/2008
;~; WAAH!

SakuraDrops93 chapter 2 . 8/26/2006
My heart actually sank for the first time in my 13 years. *Sniff*
kingdomfantasyanime453 chapter 2 . 7/28/2006
me no likey story ending
Hikari the Keyblade of Hope chapter 2 . 7/1/2006
Oh My God... It's so sad! WAAH! Nice detailing though, hope you make but not this angsty
k o u s e n chapter 2 . 6/27/2006




I suck.

Sorry xD
concluding remarks chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Well...see, I liked that. One problem I had with it was that if Namine shredded it, I'm not so sure that Roxas would take the time to piece together those itty bitty pieces. "I left them on the ground, the picture depicting my love for you." Unless that's supposed to mean Namine left the paper pieces still in the shape of the picture...?

And...honestly? I think Namine overreacted. She's a smart and sensible girl. I know that the sudden 'realization' that one of your best friends hates you, and has been pretending to like/love you is pretty awful, but still...I could see her avoiding him. I could see her losing her appetite. Becoming unnaturally introverted. She's slightly timid and weak, so this betrayal would probably be a hit to her confidence/self-esteem/etc. But suicide...? I'm not so sure. I like Namine. She has a quiet strength, but it only comes into play if she's encouraged/has other people with her.

I liked the ending smile, though. Kind of creepy.

Ehh...I'm not sure if there's really a character in KH that could be suicidal, possibly. Maybe Riku. Only if you're talking extreme. How about...

Jiminy Cricket?

Kidding. Ahah. haha. ha. . ah.a. Yeah.


Not to say you're a bad writer, of course. I've really liked some of your other drabbles.

Cloud Strife Lover chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
so beautifully... angusty. i just love it. ive had a bad day... er ... yesterday... seeing how it 1:00 am!
reader chapter 2 . 6/23/2006
this is so sad... made me almost cry
Karise-Paisley92005 chapter 2 . 6/10/2006
Other people's angst make me happy, especially when I'm angsty myself.

Still, I hope he's happy, it's his fault she jumped. Great update! KP
onototellingoyou chapter 2 . 6/9/2006
...i thought it was over but apparently it wasnt...

sort of creepy...i wonder what other stories you write...
damaster123 chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
Excellent, especially since KH2 never showed a connection between Roxas and Namine. Good work!
lady of love chapter 2 . 6/9/2006
T-T that's so sad! but so well written!
Shadow Authoress chapter 2 . 6/9/2006
Aw! Poor Namine! That's soopah angsty-licious!

It was really, really good though!
Ankosune chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Poor Naminé.

Ah, what an idiot that Roxas is.

Bad boy. -pokepoke-


Very well done.

[faves ;]
Hikari the Keyblade of Hope chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
aw... that's so sad... poor Namine...
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