|Reviews for The Hell Hounds|
| JacklynK chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
If we're supposed to understand, I don't... If we're not, the suspense is really cool, I can never pull that shit off. A warning, however: don't forget descriptions of surroundings. I do the same exact thing, and if you don't tell us what we're supposed to be seeing, then we're all blind.
Awesome work, though! An actually origional concept, score!
| Brimseye chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
hey i like pb but i dont really like or know much about sailor moon...sorry. no offence. i just wanted to tell you your writing is very good an i'll give the second chap a try when it comes out but chrono is a watch of some sort and the sleep chamber is called cryo. :) hope that helps. k c u.