|Reviews for Deja Vu|
| Aquatic-Idealist chapter 12 . 10/21/2007
Huh, it seems that the other fic in this section: "Follow The Southern Cross" stole your thunder. Also, publishing this entire fanfic makes it difficult for you to get attention, since people aren't really willing to read 12,604 words in one sitting.
Now, this fic is quite good in relation to its quality. It has plenty of action scenes, and some romance with Mike and Mica. However, the chapters are either too short to be exciting, or the paragraphs are so huge that its difficult to read through them.
All in all, this fic isn't too bad. Though it might not be a masterpiece, it's pretty good for your age. (I'm an adult, so yeah, I'm old.) Well, not too shabby, there, and I hope that you'll keep on contributing to this Startropics section, as it has been badly neglected over the year.