Reviews for My Last Breath
aashhess chapter 2 . 4/29/2006
that was great. plz updat soon? it was awsome and i loved it.
funngurl chapter 2 . 4/27/2006
I luved it and I wrote a poem wher Kagome died called I'm sorry love. Anyway that rocked and I think u should write more stuff. I'll read it 4 sure!
Trollian-SirenSong chapter 2 . 4/18/2006
good but write more plz plz plz...
Jesslca chapter 2 . 4/17/2006
Awesome! I love it!
Kikoto chapter 2 . 4/16/2006
Great story! I think you could make more chapters and make them longer to but otherwise its perfect!
Usaaya chapter 2 . 4/15/2006
I loved this you have to keep it up! Stop with the evil cliff hangers though please? Lol. J/K Keep writing though! This is getting good. .;
AzzY chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Hey! That was really good...I'm excited to see what you come up with next! You have SOME talent...wish I could wright like that! Can't wait to read your next chappie! _
Usaaya chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
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InuChild chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Dude, this was awesome! Srry, i don't have e-mail. Write some more, please! G2G!
Jesslca chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Great start...I think I know what's gonna happen...can u pls continue this, I have a good feeling about this one! :)
beautiful-illusions13 chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
aw that is so sad...keep on writin it
FMA4EVER chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
UPDATE! PLZ! I'LL LOVE YOU 4EVER! this is so good!
kitsunegal-chan chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
i like the fact that there is a glimmer of hope at the end, with sesshoumaru's sword and all! good job, me likey!