Reviews for Rain
Nike Scarlet chapter 1 . 2/7
Roy...I wanna kill you. I know that you hate yourself...but I really really wanna kill you...
J.K. Kelly chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
Don't supposed to could write the other parts as an on continuing thing for this since the Blue Flame was the first of four parts. That is if you haven't made them into other one shots.
Mamita chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Hello, I love your fic, that motherfucker is Roy, and still smiles, I love Ed, even a little silly before, and Roy is a bit selfish and jerk, especially because my favorite couple is RoyxEd , even parental, I prefer Yaoi lot more including, hopefully you make more fics of them, so still thanks and kisses.
DrummerDancer chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Loved it!
crazyAanime chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Isn't this based off the doujinshi?
Dead account no longer here chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
I swear to good this was a comic. That or I had dejuvu. I sexy, rapepy dejuvu. Ah, rape keeps the story going in stories. In real life it sucks though.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
you should type the rest of it

please
AndreaMustang chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I loved this. I hated reading it so much, and it absolutely disgusted me. But you wrote it so well, and dark stuff is always the best. Thanks for posting something outside of the usual Roy-Ed fluff.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
You were coping blue flame (CD Drama)
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Never mine I just read the top...
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...sorry

Mean colonel
Amarissia chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Excellent fic, wonderfully dark. Thank you!
MyDoll chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
This was very difficult to read. It made me sick to my stomach just imagining Edwards pain. I would love a sequel to this where Ed breaks to Al, and Al goes beserk on Roy. I would love that. What Roy did was cruel, heartless, and just plain ugh. But your writing style made it fantastic! Amazing work. :)
The Button Harlequin chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
*Le gasp!* That was perfectly, delicioiusly evil!
Anon chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
...O.O

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sorryimahopelessromantic chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Poor edward :o when he said hed do anything 2 get his brothers body back, he meant it...grr roy eds rite the lead u gave him better be true, or ed wont be the only one kickin your a**...hmm wats the link/site can i find that blue flame story on?
meme chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
i felt like have been read the same story somewhere else,, i think the story same as Blue Flame manga, u know... (?confused?)
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