Reviews for If Only
Lattelady chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
You broke my heart big time. I could feel almost every word as you wrote. This was a fitting tribute to John Spencer. I think you would have said, "You did good, kid."
Kennedy Leigh Morgan chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Oh for sad. But this was really, really good. I liked how you wrote it from Annabeth's perspective, and how you describe what she's feeling. Awesome job!
greeneyesblue chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Wow that was great! We so need more McBeth on here, I mean they don't even have Annabeth's name in the drop down box!

Really beautiful, I loved it .
ChildlikeWonder chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Oh gosh...

I loved this story so much!

It was written in character very well, and I loved the part about Leo's watch.

*sigh*

Poor Anna. I wish she had told him. But somehow... I think he knew.

Please write more soon!

-Misha
ceemonster chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Minor details - The episode took place in Nov. There was no "springing" forward around the time of his death.

Secret Service is trained to keep a person stabilized for 10mins in situations like a heartattack; 10mins because they are never more than 10mins from a hospital or other medical facility.

Other than that and a few grammar mistakes - write not right - you have promise. Good job.
jenna's last jam chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
That is so sad! I miss John! :(