Reviews for Meteor Shower
Guest chapter 11 . 3/23/2015
Just a heads up, "ow" is used when a person gets hurt. I think you mean "oh" instead. Everthing else was fine!
padrrhhajfenmak chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
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padrrhhajfenmak chapter 11 . 4/20/2011
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that was a good story

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CrimsonKuroNeko-chan chapter 11 . 8/28/2010
awwwwwwwww kawaiiiii sumrie turned nicer 2 mikan!
watersirenssong chapter 4 . 8/13/2009
they selpet in the same bed?
Aery12 chapter 11 . 4/25/2009
This is a really touching story...

i'm not a persona fan or anything but i like the way you portrayed him...

in fact i like how you portrayed all the characters it may be a bit OOC but in my POV this is how they're supposed to act in case they change their attitudes...

a bit OOC but their usual characters and attitudes are still intact...

You did a VERY NICE JOB!

Gambatte ne?

i'll continue reading more of your stories...
greengalbkdc02 chapter 11 . 12/16/2008
its quite nice really, just continue your stories...

I'm just new here and I'm thinking of writing a story... hope you will read it when I finish... D
amc3AK1411551S chapter 11 . 8/18/2008
I love it!It was so romantic...
minahoru chapter 11 . 6/4/2007
simple BUT meaningful story arigatou for the very beautiful story keep up da gud work wahaha!
girlonthemove210 chapter 11 . 5/29/2007
I love ur story!
uwindang chapter 8 . 4/19/2007
Why didn't Natsume burned the hostage-taker of Mikan? Mikan has a Nullification Alice. She can overcome Natsume's Fire.
torn heart of moonshadow chapter 11 . 2/8/2007
well its good. but i think some of the characters are in their real attitude, especially natsume, well he doesn't usually show his emotions that often even if it is to mikan or any other but i think the natsume character in your story is so kawaii. another thing the most out character there would be persona, he absolutely DISAPPROVED natsume being with the one he loves. and he wants natsume to be alne. its nice to see him in a different side hehe.. NICE STORY i put in one of my favorites
Alexa23 chapter 11 . 5/31/2006
hey sorry for the late review its so bad it ended already anyways you should keep writing ga fics ya know
animegoddessemina chapter 11 . 5/24/2006
i read your story from top to bottom it was really cool hope that you will make another exiting fic
zephyrlight chapter 6 . 5/20/2006
umm sorry to say this.. .. you're going off-track with the charrys' personalities and stuff..
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