Reviews for Lifeline
PA1NK1LLER chapter 7 . 5/3/2010
That was nice but I do have to say in chapter 2 you say Leo has tubes coming out of him and yet in chapter 7 he's getting up and hugging people, not only Leo be unable to do this because of the tubes, cables and IV's etc. If he had a heart attack that bad he would NEVER have the strength to do this. Although I will say the best scenes were when it was just Leo and Annabeth, they were quite nice.
Iara chapter 7 . 4/15/2006
That was so adorable. I loved it.
Rory von Trapp chapter 4 . 4/13/2006
This is a beautiful story! After the events of the past couple of weeks, it's nice to see a story with a happier ending. My only suggestion would be to try to tie up loose ends before ending each chapter. It would be much easier to follow if you had more of a conclusion. At times it seems as if you're ending right in the middle of the scene just where things could get interesting. Great job!
Iara chapter 4 . 4/13/2006
This is sweet! I love Leo/Annabeth. I can't wait for teh 5th chapter.