Reviews for Who Wants To Own A Restaurant?
charmedbaby11 chapter 12 . 4/19/2006
Awesome story. I love it
charmedbaby11 chapter 11 . 4/19/2006
awsesome chapter
charmedbaby11 chapter 10 . 4/18/2006
what will they do now?
quills chapter 7 . 4/17/2006
Wow, I never thought you would be able to weave such a complicated and multi-faceted plot into a story about a reality show. Nice story.
charmedbaby11 chapter 9 . 4/17/2006
Kill them
charmedbaby11 chapter 8 . 4/16/2006
Will Cole tell the sisters waht he finds out
charmedbaby11 chapter 7 . 4/16/2006
KILL EVERYONE ELSE
charmedbaby11 chapter 6 . 4/15/2006
will they figur it out
Nancy T chapter 5 . 4/15/2006
This is a really well done (so to speak) story! Good dialogue, the action moves right along, and the mystery is intriguing. I'll bet the reviewer who said the ham had darklighter poison was correct, but I'm guessing it's an essence of evil (which is why it poisons Leo, repulses Paige, and Phoebe kind of likes it).

Poor Cole, thinking that if he fixes the contest for Piper she'll like him and Phoebe will love him for it - that's JUST the kind of thing he'd think when he's in that in-between-good-and-evil mode. It would never strike him that maybe Piper wants to win on her own, even if it means she risks losing!

Just one correction: The correct term is "sous" chef (pronounced "sue"). It's a French word meaning "under." The misspelling is funny, because of course "souse" means a drunk, and I'll bet there ARE a lot of "souse chefs" in the world!
charmedbaby11 chapter 5 . 4/14/2006
update asap
charmedbaby11 chapter 4 . 4/14/2006
what will happen now?
Lamarquise chapter 4 . 4/14/2006
Oh fun...the secret ingredient in the ham is something like darklighter poison? Oh fun...

Anyone want to bet that there's something demonic in one of the contestants' agendas? :)
xXx Gemz xXx chapter 3 . 4/13/2006
hey good story so far keep on goin!

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MJLS chapter 3 . 4/13/2006
I like this story, It's a good writing like this, I also like it that Cole is in it 2 and that he is trying to be good again for soon
charmedbaby11 chapter 3 . 4/13/2006
Keep writing
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