Reviews for Px3777
resq188 chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
I won’t repeat what others have said. It is a good story. Needs a little reviewing and cleaning. Some of the things/events, are just to out there. It’s a little hard to follow the story some times (not talking about the CAP's). I would call it a good rugh draft and a good store line.
CedarPineSpruce chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
Hi, I thought the summary sounded interesting, but I simply cannot read a all-caps story. It is too hard on the eyes.

With a few clicks of the mouse in a nice word processing program the whole story can be changed to "Sentence Case." If you don't know how to do that email me. Ok?
Feynor chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
Hey, Please kill the CAPS LOCK !

And it's O'Neill, 2 l's. There's another Jack O'Neil in the Air Force, but he has no sense of humor.

(That last part was taken from the series)
Malaskor chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Please repost this story so that it isn't completely in CAPITAL LETTERS, cause that is very uncomfortable to read.