LOVED everything about this story!
Ranger hmmm ;) so appropriate!
I really was hoping we would see Gretsky the puppy someday in future eps-always season 13 eh? ;)
So will be checking out your other stories!

Sorry but you are not allowed to end it ;)
That last chp-WOAH! Poor Brennan-her parents, her cat, herself...love Booth btw...he loves her so much even if he doesn't want to admit it.

Omg love how smart our 2 are! ;) they truly are THE #1 crime fighting pair, aren't they!? :)

Did Jeff catch on? Uh oh! Brennan use those martial arts if he is still there!

Lol I am sorry but you have got to just love Brennan ;) it did take her being a mommy to finally settle that crazy death wish with suspects streak to end ;)

Btw last CHP-LOVED THE SALSA scene ;) Poor Booth, he should know better ;)
Hmmm...is the book's author who I think it is?

THAT dude was creepy even to me the way he was with Brennan.
The part about Brennan not being to able to write about family made me sad for her :( but I thought it was sweet how Booth was trying to help her.

I honestly feel like this was a missed episode...like truly amazing how much you are like the Bones writers! You def watch the writing closely to mimic their style :) nicely done and nice tease at the end for the next chp :)

The way you write the characters, especially Booth and Brennan are SO spot on. The banter, sarcastic remarks, etc are SO them in that first season. I believe now more than ever Booth didn't want Brennan to come along because he was partners with her-he did it because he wanted to be with her and didn't know how to say it :) awww...as for Brennan, well now we know she was in love with her studly hunky agent since season 2 ;) I LOVE BONES. :)

Love it! Feels like an episode that didn't air during Writers Strike.

nicely done

Lots of loving it!

Up until the last two chapters, the story was fantastic, and read just like the episodes - very action packed, and well done with the scene breaks. Especially the introduction in chapter 1.

But I felt a little gypped between the last two chapters; it felt like you'd missed a section. A little abrupt, perhaps.

Otherwise, great story. I like that you incorporated Tempe's cat from the books. I love Birdie!

Very nice story and a satisfyingly happy ending. Thank you.

Enjoyed the story. True to character and loved B&B interaction. I also liked the inclusion of the kitties, new and old and the Ranger name. Just like Booth to be cocky about it. Thanks for your time and effort!

Hi this was an excellent fic. The story was interesting, the writing was in keeping with the show - I really enjoyed it. Thanks so much for sharing. Going to read all your other fics now!