Reviews for Seven Days
Etta Daring chapter 10 . 7/30
That was the strongest ten chapter story I have ever read! How on earth did you manage such poly in so little space? Goodness, if I could write like you, I'm sure I should never complain again! Your writing is so strong and you have such a way with words, I can feel the character's emotions and see what they do. You are truly talented.
Birddy chapter 10 . 7/28
That was absolutely adorable. Wonderful job!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2017
Beautiful, quaint (in a good way) prose. Reminds me SO MUCH of the books. Wonderful job!
Jenarla xXx chapter 10 . 3/9/2017
Sorry for the previous review, my finger slipped.

I wanted to ask if you'd ever consider writing a story from Howl's PoV as I enjoyed you writing that. Also, I really liked how even though Howl didn't love the girls and hurt them, they grew into better woman for it. That was really well thought through. A very enjoyable story. Thank you.
Jenarla xXx chapter 9 . 3/9/2017
I still really enjoy Howl's pov. Have you c
Jenarla xXx chapter 8 . 3/9/2017
I'm glad to find out what he said / did with Lissy. I was curious there.

Personally, I think the words in bold at the end could come from both Sophie or Howl which is nice.
Jenarla xXx chapter 7 . 3/8/2017
Really nicely done writing about the girls. The insight about the shallow, vapid girls needing validation from others and it leading to bullying and the strong woman who knows you have to make things happen yourself if you want them to happen.

I really enjoyed this chapter with all the character growth. Not so much Lissy's accusation about virginity, it didn't seem in keeping. I would have gone with something about him eating her heart which I guess he does figuratively do when he leaves a girl heartbroken.

Howl's appearance was also a little disappointing but I guess he's also had a bit of personal growth we weren't witness too.
Jenarla xXx chapter 6 . 3/8/2017
So first, Howl did make her fall asleep/faint/whatever but he clearly made the other girls forget him. It not Sophie.

Second, Martha was great, slapping Sophie and telling her how she and Lettie had always looked up to her. Get a grip Sophie, you're great!

Third, Howl broke his promise which he said he wouldn't do! Tut tut tut.

I can't make up my mind wether Howl sending her a message at the end was good or not. You have me so torn! Well done.
Jenarla xXx chapter 5 . 3/8/2017
Come on Sophie! Tell us how you feel!
Short but sweet. You really get me feeling for her.
Jenarla xXx chapter 4 . 3/8/2017
Dun dun duuuuh!

I loved Howl's perspective. I'm hoping there's more of that. Not quite sure what he did to Lissy but I know she deserved it. Descriptive and well written as ever.
Jenarla xXx chapter 3 . 3/8/2017
~Oooh Howl has feelings for Sophie~

I must admit, I prefer non-blushing, strong Sophie to shy Sophie but I think you're doing a good job of capturing a girl's first attraction to a man quite well.
Jenarla xXx chapter 2 . 3/8/2017
Enjoyable, very descriptive again. Personally I would have said his name was Howell, slightly more personal information than she might first realize and a nod to the book. But that's just me. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Jenarla xXx chapter 1 . 3/8/2017
Obviously there's not much to go on, being the first chapter, but you paint such a picture with your words. It was positively enchanting and I could almost believe I was there in Ingary with Sophie.

I also really like that you're following the book ideals fairly closely. Looking forward to reading more.
Alley McNally chapter 10 . 11/15/2016
I found this older story that you wrote and I have to say that it is as good as the one you that I followed before. It's very different, but I like that. I almost wish for more. Which is awesome! I've been reading a lot of Howl's Moving Castle fanfics lately and I have found them generally lacking. Your stories are the exception to the rule. Thank you! I can't wait to see what you write next! (PS: I'll provably poke around your profile sometime soon to read more stuff!) Alley
seikkyokuka chapter 10 . 10/18/2016
Such a cute story!
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