I love the way this is written. It really draws you into the action. You've got a unique style of writing that I have never witnessed before, and to cap off this review, everything is neat, concise, and clear. I cannot tell you how glad I am to have found your story, and I'm super excited to read the sequel. Keep up the good work.

the accent thing and broken english, especially with Kwan, is both off putting and increasing immersion to a degree. The dialogue choice aside, I am loving this fanfiction just as much as some of your other works.

It's amazing just how much Harry changed in only two months!

These reviews seem to be full of impressively spineless people, :whats that? they are stealing your money? well don't cut them off or else YOU are the bag guy"

That was a long and awesome ride in the last few chapters. The lost city was really cool and I liked the added real history stuff. I don't know yet if you ever finished the next story, but I will definitely be checking. Great story.

Ok...I am going straight to the sequil and not passing go. LOVED THIS

Ok. So Bill's not dead. Still not happy about this. But somehow I'm more ok with it that I am with Bill dieing. This is so not cool. I simultaneously love and hate this damn story. Is that even possible? Which makes it one of the best one's I've read in a bit.

I love the relationship between Kwan and Harry and Hack and Harry. Priceless!

Gah! Now I'm hooked on this story and can't put it down. I gotta say him learning to apparate from the hitwizard was funny. I just kept imagining him popping all around their camp trying to get away.

Damn. Now Bill has redeemed himself. Well, kinda. I guess.
"She rode you like a cheep broom." ... I'm still laughing at that.

Ok this is bullshit. I get that Dumbledor is poor and supposedly only using Harry's money for "the greater good" and to help less fortunate kids get into school. That's all well and good. But it crosses a line when it's not directly told to the person that the money belongs to. Not only that but he began using it to manipulate and outright control Harry. BEHIND HIS BACK. WITHOUT HIS KNOWLEDGE. That's theft. No matter how it's looked at. I don't care what the sob story is supposed to be. Didn't they think that Harry would willingly hand over the contents of his volt to ensure the outcome of a victory against Tom Riddle or to make sure that the people that he was closest to, the people that he loved had the best life that he could afford to give them? He would have. That's just fact. Harry should feel betrayed because he was betrayed. I'm not digging this Bill making him feel bad about what essentially he had every ethical, moral and logical reason to be pissed about. Fuck that noise.

Just a Spade casually dropping by
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Yeah, I'm done. It's breaking my suspense of disbelief that Harry is getting screwed over this hard and isn't planning to go on a murder spree. A few pranks in retaliation for everything that's happened these past few chapters is just pissing me off.

Bundle up?! Rio de Janeiro's winters are long, comfortable, humid, and mostly clear. Over the course of the year, the temperature typically varies from 65F to 88F (and is rarely below 61F or above 95F). Which translates to about 18 to 31 degrees Celsius. Pretty warm and humid. Unless... he was teasing Harry and being facetious.

Grrrrr! I can hardly believe that Hermione believes the crap coming out of her mouth. She believes she's doing this "for" Harry instead of "to" Harry? And the Twins? Oh, my gosh! I think Harry needs to destroy a few more things in their shop to the tune of at least, say, 1000 galleons!