Reviews for Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure
thepkrmgc chapter 22 . 10/22/2015
its fitting that the patronus and animagus: both reflections of harry's soul are the key to defeating the daemon
thepkrmgc chapter 21 . 10/22/2015
nice job on dumble's responses, and on thinking up a suitably awesome way to take out the demon
thepkrmgc chapter 20 . 10/22/2015
a bit more foreshadowing for this plot twist would have been nice, but its interesting nonetheless. I admit that i wasnt cynical enough to think that you would kill bill but you did make it obvious that a lot of people werent going to get out of there alive
thepkrmgc chapter 19 . 10/22/2015
hopefully collins can recover his sanity, nothing like a SNAFU to amp up the drama
thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 10/22/2015
nice job on the aftermath of the in medias, its a shame the second person perspective stops us from seeing the order's reaction to bill's ultimatum
thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 10/22/2015
harry's most recent message to luna is particularly poignant: and i should reread the first chapter again now that were caught up
thepkrmgc chapter 16 . 10/22/2015
the animagus development is great, hopefully harry can patch things up with luna
wolfd890 chapter 23 . 10/22/2015
two days of solid reading and basically ignoring chores/forgoing human interactions to finish this. And dare I say it was worth it. What a great story, with an excellent and original plot. But the best part was the continuous humour and witty dialogue. I very much enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing this great story.

thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 10/22/2015
dang, the karina plotline certainly came to a head, hopefully harry can get out of this latest SNAFU safe and not in prison
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 10/22/2015
you do a good job on the combat,and dont forget to give it context
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 10/22/2015
it seems like were about to catch up with the in medias rez, nice bit of drama between luna and harry, but im not sure why he isnt telling her his form
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 10/21/2015
I wonder how these trolls and goblins will join up with the team in time to raid the ruins?
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 10/21/2015
great job on the animagus: its the best ive seen it done so far by a large margin: props to harry for his maturity too!
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 10/21/2015
a timeskip is probably for the best, it should be cool to see the story progress further
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 10/21/2015
interesting game, though im more interested in the curse breaking stuff
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