BEAUTIFUL! beautiful fanfic... it las been a long time since i read anything this good...this is simply wonderful...keep writing...great work.

I'm very glad I stumbled upon this story (albeit over 10 years later). You are an excellent storyteller and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!

So glad I got a rec for this story. It was absolutly amazing! Like wow. I loved it thank you very much for writing it!

Simply amazing! I haven't read a story as beautiful as this in quite a while! Thank you! Hope you will continue to write more stories like this! Best wishes for everything!

This was so fantastic - and as close to Lewis's writing style as I've seen. I very much enjoyed, thanks for all your hard work on this!

i should think the tale of lucy chasing King Lune's nephew with a dagger would make a splendid one-shot :)

enjoying the story so far

..sorry my phone posted before I finished...
Anyways, I would love to read more of your fan fiction and I would be interested in reading any original works if you have any. Thank you so much for so many enjoyable reads and best wishes for what life has in store for you.

I just wanted to let you know how thoroughly I enjoy your stories. I love the way you write all the characters. I actually read "Kingdoms Come" before this, and I love how the characters have their same hearts, just more grown up. It's like some other reviewer said: you probably keep the closest to Lewis's work than any other author. Lucy and Corin especially we're my favourites in this story. I don't know if you're still writing fan fiction, but I would love to be able to read more

Exceptional chapter. I was wondering if Peter would be making an appearance returning from the north. Very well written and exciting, I was holding my breath the whole way through.

I just finished reading this fic, and I must say it was terrific! You did a great job characterizing everyone. I don't know which part was my favorite-it was all very good!

Aslan's Blessings,
Fierce

I liked the beginning...very well written.

Such a completely enjoyable effort! You are so skilled in your narrative, nothing jarred me from being completely captivated. Thank you!

"The devil I will," Peter growled, and threw it.
Awesome! All your outpouring very much worth it. Excellent chapter.

Hahaha! "Susan the Incredibly Pigheaded". Love it. I don't know if you even read reviews on things you wrote so long ago, but I'd just like to say your prose is superb. It flows, the narrative style is smooth, convincing; obviously the product of a deft touch. Excellent, excellent writing skills. Can't praise it enough.

I'm almost sure (because I LURK and PARASITISE and NEVER REVIEW) that this is the first time I've let you know exactly how awesome I think you and this story is. It's unpardonable, since I think I've reread it at least six times. But you most certainly deserve a review, and I keep and keep putting it off until I have time enough to write a long enough one to do it justice, but I think you ought to have something rather than nothing, because the absurd truth appears to be that five years hasn't been sufficient time, and now Enough is Enough.

HHB is easily my favourite Narnia book, and being given a chance to experience it from a completely different point of view is the most marvelous thing. Pitch perfect characterisations (poor dear Lucy, trying so hard to be patient and everything she isn't; Edmund doing his very best not to lose his temper with Susan-and almost succeeding; Susan-oh, where to start?-she's such an easy character to mishandle or caricature and you never wrote her but with sympathetic understanding, even when one just sort of wanted to shake her; and Peter's return Just In Time to save Susan STILL gives me goosebumps), gorgeous Lewis-like narration, and just everything! The attack on the Cair is my favourite section, I think, and now I can't imagine that it didn't happen. Wonderful, wonderful work. :)

Hopefully I'll get back and write a better review in future, but here this is for now. Thanks again for taking us all on such a delightful trip.