Reviews for Brendan's Struggle
Novanto chapter 2 . 8/26/2010
At last! someone who doesn't think that Brendan's white hair is just a weird hat!
Soy Soy Joo chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Wow -claps- this story was so...so AWESOME! Man i loved the way you write your stories :D will there be a sequel for this? and is the real Brendan alive? what will happen to May? Copy Brendan is a bastard :D

Copy Brendan: HEY!

Me: BLEH! LOSER!

Brendan: HAHAHAHAH LOSER!

Copy Brendan: -cries in the corner-

Me: Aw he's crying.

Brendan: Good for him that idiot.

May: HIYAS!

Copy Brendan and Brendan: MAY!

May: O Brendans?

Copy Brendan: May -winks- you KNOW I am the REAL Brendan.

Brendan: YOU ARE NOT! May I'M the real Brendan.

Me: -wears Brendan's clothes- I AM BRENDAN!

May: OMG! YOU ARE BRENDAN! -grabs me-

BrendanandCopyBrendan: WHAT! SHE'S NOT BRENDAN! SHE'S A GIRL! SHE DOESNT EVEN HAVE WHITE HAIR!

Me: BAH! I am Brendan :D

May: Whoot Whoot! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL FOR THIS :D
Galbinus-Rayquaza chapter 3 . 10/19/2007
OMFG. FREAKING AWESOME. :D

I remember Pondertheworld reccommending this fic to me sometime ago, but then the stupid review system thing wasn't up, but, I just have to say... THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY AND IT SHOULD GET 100x MORE REVIEWS. D

FAVING! -claps-

[Rayquaza]
pondertheworld chapter 3 . 8/18/2007
God... THAT WAS SUCH A GREAT STORY! I WAS ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THE WHOLE ENTIRE TIME!

I'm confused though. Brendan... Is dead... And his 'double' is alive? Please set me straight! Or wait, are they both still alive? His 'double' is going to get May killed? AGH! I'M CONFUSED!

So Brendan's Pokemon are still alive? Or are they dead too? I'm not so sure...

God, that was a great story. One of the best I've ever read. You rock!

pondertheworld
Catching Rain chapter 3 . 4/21/2007
Oh, no! They found the wrong brendan... That creep! O_O
Catching Rain chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
manic depressive, much?
razor.the.red chapter 3 . 6/15/2006
Well, I enjoyed reading this, even though the ending ain't happy :(

You described the scenes really well; nice hack 'n slash and all. Also, adding the Godsmack song was a brilliant move! (how did you get to know them? PoP?)

Overall, nice job. Looking forward to your next project.

Keep it up.
QUEEN EEVEE chapter 3 . 6/14/2006
QE:I'm confused.

E.S.P:You normally are.

QE:Yeah. POOR BRENDAN!

Cyndaquil:Shut up.

QE:No.

Evestar:Exerlent story.
Tiakaneko chapter 3 . 6/14/2006
Ohh... Dammit, you can write stories so well! If only I can turn this into an anime episode...

You did it, Black Murder.. You've finally received the attention you've been craving all along! Including all the attention from me..

This is very, very good.. Angsty.. The first angsty story that I enjoy. I can't believe you made me like angst.. ;P But in a good way, mind..
Enzara chapter 2 . 4/22/2006
Wow really cool chapter i really liked it update soon.
Tiakaneko chapter 2 . 4/22/2006
I can already see this fan fiction as a movie in the future.. You make it sound really suspensing and good! Keep this all up, boyfriend!
Tiakaneko chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Phew... Was I relief when you said that this story wasn't over... Well, then...

I like the way you describe the Pokemon and Brendan's angsty feelings. Great!

Love,Asuka
razor.the.red chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Dang, this is some heavy sh! And I love it!

Keep up the good work!