|Reviews for Origins|
| Link chapter 22 . 9/4/2016
Last chapter was really cute
| Marauders G.W chapter 22 . 2/27/2015
come several years later this fanfic, but I really loved, especially the last chapters.
Thank you very much for your work
| waddiwasiwitch chapter 22 . 10/3/2014
Nice story especially the last couple of chapters..
| Guest chapter 22 . 3/26/2014
*runs over to bed and flops down crying* So beautiful! So incredibly beautiful! The canon and originality blends so beautifully! Love it love it love it!
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/26/2014
OMG! Fan squeal!
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/26/2014
Forget the slingshot Roy! She'll bring out the big guns now!
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/26/2014
The development of the story is just too beautiful! I'm going to burst out crying!
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/26/2014
This has just the right amount of humor, drama, and angst. I love it!
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/26/2014
Riza's change is so gradual. I love how she evolved from a stubborn, high-strung kid to an elegant yet deadly woman.
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/25/2014
Every Royai fan should read this.
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/25/2014
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/25/2014
Havoc's portrayal is hilarious!
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/25/2014
I would have never thought the boy on the train was Maes. What a clever way to put him in here!
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/25/2014
Drama time! Now bring on the juicyy stuff!
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/25/2014
I love Riza's slingshot. It's just so fitting of her.