Reviews for Rain
Taayluur chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I think if Riza died the Colonel would go off the edge, first Ishbal, Hughes, then Riza. He'd probably go into depression, or get a heart attack before 40. Anyway, i loved this poem.
Jazzy Uchiha chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
im not sure y im reading roy/riza, when i usually read ed/winry, but it was good
Releina Artemis Rockefeller chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
I read most of your works and quite honestly, I just noticed that most of your poems' theme is death. Don't be too obsessed with death, okay? Live. Love. Eat. Just like what Wolfgang Puck usually says! ~_ You're still young, so don't expect to die soon. :P Just kidding.


I didn't feel much emotion that this poem wants me to feel but I do get the point. It wasn't explosive, but you did a great job nevertheless. ~_~

::Releina Artemis::
Melitza chapter 1 . 4/16/2006

Just kidding. I always wanted to say that.

I could do with all the events leading up to it. I can see Riza dying to protect Roy. And I will cry if it happens, cause they need to be together...

Ok, I'll stop being a rabid fangirl now.
SwordSamuraiWhisper6 chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Wow, that was... COOL!
Kishu Aonabi Shindara chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Hello ! :3

I just want to tell you that you that it doesn't suck at all, it is very cute ! I like your fic very much, that's so sad and beautiful the same time.. T.T ow, Roy...

Ja ! Matane ! See you :D

Schreibertooth chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
this does not suck. it is touching and sad. give yourself more credit!
Nilmiel chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Nil: Aww, this is the second ROyai tragedy ive read and im gonna cry.. this was very nicely done, such a cute little poem that outlined roy very well... i love it!
Onyxlight chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
It did not suck, it was actually quite beautiful...
Author Pen Name chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
I think it was great, I know you are a better poet then me :)