| Reviews for Mirror, Mirror |
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   WhateverGoes09 chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 curses! I want you to continue you that as another story! It is so good and ...poetic... lol. Cute and lovely once again! Loved it! DeppGirl |
| Fallen for Eternity chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 This is great! I loove it.. I hope it's not a one-shot. ergh, cliffhangers irk me. |
| MarilynJean chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 Aw, this was so sweet. Amazing job, it was beautiful. |
| Roxy chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 utterly amazing! i loved it! well done! |
| PotterSnitch7 chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 awesome! another one-shot! i loved this one, although it leaves questions...which i suppose it's supposed to, anyway. huh. ah well. great job on this one! |
| pcastro51 chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 awesome! that was amazing! although, i didn't get the thing you said before the story. but the story was amazing! |
| siruisblack18 chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 That was simply amazing! Soo cute! I love your writeing! Pleaase please write more one-shots like this, you write all my all time FAVORITE stories! |
| smooth.stutter chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 'The pure quandary of it all was that Lily Evans had a replica Mirror of Erised on the inside of her eyelids'. Prefect, and may I stress Perfect, sentance to end the story. I like the fact that it doesn't end in a perfect ending ( although I do love it when it does ), but is just .. perfect. Keep up the wicked one-shots! Favourites! |
| GoldenPhoenix and SilverTiger chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 Awsome oneshot. I really liked the way you ended it. Write more soon! |
| Anna B. the Greek chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 You know what's so great about this story? That, even though it's no surprise what James and Lily would see in the mirror, you wrote it in a way that really captures the reader. It was more than 'he forced her to the Room of Requirement, made her look in the mirror, end of story'. From the kidnapping scene to their venture in the corridors, and the actual event... very well set. Superb writing, too - I think you're getting better with each story. And... the physical contact... the kiss... *melts* (I want James!) One typo I spotted, though: - ily shut her eyes and touched here forehead with his. - *her* forehead ;) (Though I think 'touched his forehead with hers' would be better) Keep up the good work! Anna :) |
| dragonriderhp chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 *shivers* omg that was so good! sent chills up my spine...poor james he seemed so lonely at the end! great job, not as funny as normal, but that's ok...it really fit the story and it was brilliant! excellent one-shot! i can't wait to read more :) |
| Kit49 chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 Oh wow, wonderful! Very origional and brilliantly written. The characters were awesome, and the whole idea was just great. This is definitely a favorite! |
| gulistanlik chapter 1 . 4/15/2006 If you were to give me a million years, I would NEVER think up of this idea. How good is your imagination? VERY obviously! This is nice, so sweet. Wow! You're shooting up with a heap of one-shots and I'm reading them, wanting more and more every time. Keep up the good work! Gulistanlik |
| oceancitygirl chapter 1 . 4/14/2006 I was hoping you would post this on soon so I could put it in my c2, as soon as I saw it posted on your LJ! (Wow, that was an uber long sentence.) Excellent job, once again! |
| katastropheee chapter 1 . 4/14/2006 omg that is SO awesome i LOVE it |