Reviews for Peripheral
Psycho Lullaby chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
Short and sweet. Very nice. That last line was ideal. *loves*
Tekli chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
This was BEAUTIFUL.

Really-the way it portrayed Ed and Al's relationship was just perfect. Their relationship is one of the most inspiring I have ever seen, and this reflected that so well. "Anyway, it didn’t matter which world they were in- together, they were always in their own world" -THAT is so true. So very true. _ I always felt so bad for them, that they'd end up away from everything, but this seems so much more likely. They love each other so much-not eros, but brotherly love that surpasses everything. You showed that so well.

I love your style of writing so much. It has that little something, that little spark of life, that few writers have. _

I'm sorry that this was a little incoherent, but I am truly impressed. Thank you for writing this. :)

Tekli
The New Fullmetal Alchemist chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Aw! That's incredible! It's like poetry! I love it! This is great, I like it very much! Good job! Keep it up! :)