Reviews for Breathe
SyntheticEuph0ria chapter 1 . 6/6/2008

That's all I have to say. Wow.
ShadowDrygan04 chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
i loved this story and can't wait for the next one were did you get your character from or because it sounds like my character Shadow but *shrug* can't be sure but still loved it Shadow reminded me slightly of a Wolf
DeltaSilver88 chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Very well done! That was amazing. Was Shadow a land-based or an air-based vehicle? If she was an air-based one, she must've been saved by transforming, but if she wasn't (and fell the whole way)... *salute* She's one strong-willed character. Reminds me of a wolf.
MajesticBurn chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
Whoa... that is amazing. Unfathomably sad, but beautiful. You formed an amazingly good short story. Wow.
Uftaki chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
T_T Oh _WOW_ What a powerful piece. *_* Wonderfully written. The short sentances, coupled with the repetition really heightened the tension in the fic. And the end. Wow. :( A very strong character, and a strong fic.