Reviews for The Apothecary
CezyAngel chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
i'd have preferred a more definitive ending to the story, although that might have missed the point about fate. at any rate, i liked the mood of the entire thing - it fit with the setting - but maybe you could've shown a bit more of hermione's personality to balance out severus' part?
Pobbin chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Wow. That was a really cool piece. Very nice ending, to sort of tie things up. I know I'll be thinking about it for a while. My one criticism is with the line where Snape was thinking "He remembered that girl; he’d had her as a student a few years ago". I found it distracting because, well, of course he remembered her, she was hardly any other student. I just thought it would have been stronger if he'd thought about her, connecting the memory to the hair and Harry and such, but still with perfect clarity and his usual disdain. But that's just an opinion, take it or leave it. All in all, a really nice, beautifully written little oneshot. Great work.