|Reviews for Just the Two of Us|
| Kateari chapter 11 . 2/15/2008
Is that the end?
PLEASE SAY IT ISN'T!
| Kateari chapter 3 . 2/15/2008
O! A cliffie!
| Kateari chapter 2 . 2/15/2008
| Kateari chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
I love a man in pain and so does Gingercake!
| lindajrjt chapter 11 . 2/8/2008
Well that was interesting. I think one of my favorite parts was their reaction to that machine thinking it was what would be used for the breeding. Thanks for writing this somewhat lighthearted story.
| Amaq Iraluq chapter 11 . 10/11/2006
Brilliant fanfic! I wish there was more!
| emergencyfan chapter 11 . 6/28/2006
Overall, I really liked this a lot, plenty of drama and action to move things along at a good clip with enough humor to keep it fun. Nice writing style as well as an attention to detail and the technical writing skills that makes it a pleasure to read rather than a chore. The only criticism I have is that maybe Rodney, genius though he is, might have figured out the whole "test" thing pretty quickly-the revelation seemed abrupt to me.
I'm off to try a few of your other fics! :-)
| emergencyfan chapter 8 . 6/28/2006
“If his eyes start doing that strange glowy thing, I’m out of here,” Rodney whispered to Carson.
heh heh heh
| emergencyfan chapter 5 . 6/28/2006
"They’re fine is someone is pointing a gun at you, but their useless at basic problem solving."
“Some of us are stronger than we look,” Rodney said, giving Carson a superior look.
“Aye,” Carson replied, as he started to climb up the cliff. “So that will be Ronon’s back pack then?”
Rodney spluttered in reply.
Loved it, very Carson & Rodmey!
| emergencyfan chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
“I offered to pull it straight for him, but he made a whimpering sound. So I guessed he meant no.”
| 001ElvenWarrior chapter 11 . 5/1/2006
Haha, very nice ending...just thought I'd catch up since the internet wasn't working. Very nice...Lord Dissolver...and all. It's good to know that everything worked out fine - or mostly fine. Interesting tidbit about the pool though, such as how it works and all.
I look forward to more of your stories, especially involving Carson and Rodney. It's too bad that the healing device was broken though - it could've come in very handy, but may have had either side effects or Carson may have become too dependent upon it. Nice ending though :D
| fififolle chapter 11 . 4/26/2006
Aw! Happy ending! Hooray. Nice little plot and great dialogue. Thanks for this. Must remember to put on author alert ;)
| fififolle chapter 10 . 4/26/2006
Oh no! Lemon! Quick, Carson! Ew, breeding pools, I was almost lulled there. Hilarious bit about the leaf sucker LOL. And the next chapter is the last? Shame, but I'm itching to read it.
| fififolle chapter 9 . 4/26/2006
Oh dear! Not more trouble. Headache, LOL, never saw that one coming! More good stuff.
| fififolle chapter 8 . 4/26/2006
LOL. Poor guys. Out of the frying pan and into the fire! Who would have guessed? Excellent story.