What kind of fucking idiots go back? They knew an attack was coming. Retards

The worst dialogues ever. Every thing out of character.

Well...it has been an interesting experience. You write well and in an intriguing manner. I do wish that you had finished it so that I could know what happened. I do hope that you had planned for things to be better than what led to them traveling in time. It's a much more adult story (being that canon was for young adult) and it is worrisome that you could just have it devolve into total chaos where the dark wins. I guess it doesn't matter, though. No matter the author, it's a dead story.

You write quite well, but it is quite agonizing to read. There is never a respite, only horror. You must give more hope, for this is very difficult to get through. I find myself scanning just to get through it.

Minerva is quite a bit older than canon. She was nine years YOUNGER than Riddle.

Lol you never finished the story same as original writer both quiters. You should stand in the corner for 4 hours .And think about how your readers feel

So you figured out the 2 potter .

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Ended way to soon. Shoulda beena 22 chapter story.

July 28 2006 updated.

Changeling is not the same thing. Changeling's are not magical witchs are wizards.
Thier a whole another species of supernatural.

Awsome.

Thank you,It is two o'clock in the morning,I'm too bored to sleep.

At 15 months old, a child typically can: sit up on their own, pull up on furniture and stand (as well as go from sitting to standing on their own), and most of them are actually walking quite adeptly. They are capable of feeding themselves finger food, can hold a cup, and use a spoon (even if messily). I just can’t understand why someone would write an infant as a main character, and not bother even to do a quick Google search for child development.

Enjoyed your story