Reviews for Young Again: The Rewrite
Guest chapter 5 . 2/24
What kind of fucking idiots go back? They knew an attack was coming. Retards
HossamKholeef chapter 5 . 1/17
The worst dialogues ever. Every thing out of character.
mumphie chapter 11 . 9/19/2022 has been an interesting experience. You write well and in an intriguing manner. I do wish that you had finished it so that I could know what happened. I do hope that you had planned for things to be better than what led to them traveling in time. It's a much more adult story (being that canon was for young adult) and it is worrisome that you could just have it devolve into total chaos where the dark wins. I guess it doesn't matter, though. No matter the author, it's a dead story.
mumphie chapter 8 . 9/19/2022
You write quite well, but it is quite agonizing to read. There is never a respite, only horror. You must give more hope, for this is very difficult to get through. I find myself scanning just to get through it.
mumphie chapter 5 . 9/19/2022
Minerva is quite a bit older than canon. She was nine years YOUNGER than Riddle.
Dan chapter 11 . 7/12/2022
Lol you never finished the story same as original writer both quiters. You should stand in the corner for 4 hours .And think about how your readers feel
Alexander Potter chapter 10 . 7/11/2022
So you figured out the 2 potter .
Gaius chapter 10 . 7/11/2022
Dinosaur dna mixed with Human dna creates Part human part lizard triplets in Seattle ,Washington 2020
Raven chapter 8 . 7/11/2022
Ended way to soon. Shoulda beena 22 chapter story.
Raven chapter 4 . 7/9/2022
July 28 2006 updated.
Raven chapter 2 . 7/9/2022
Changeling is not the same thing. Changeling's are not magical witchs are wizards.
Thier a whole another species of supernatural.
Gaius chapter 1 . 7/9/2022
pucsgd chapter 11 . 2/18/2022
Thank you,It is two o'clock in the morning,I'm too bored to sleep.
Djanga chapter 2 . 11/2/2021
At 15 months old, a child typically can: sit up on their own, pull up on furniture and stand (as well as go from sitting to standing on their own), and most of them are actually walking quite adeptly. They are capable of feeding themselves finger food, can hold a cup, and use a spoon (even if messily). I just can’t understand why someone would write an infant as a main character, and not bother even to do a quick Google search for child development.
jasnrob chapter 11 . 10/16/2021
Enjoyed your story
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