Reviews for Fancy Dress
nuriko dark aoi chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
muy lindo
apastron chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Some minor grammatical mistakes cast aside, this fic is great. Natsume is still Natsume, and I can see that you've struggled to make him in-character. You passed 8D

Thanks for the read!
Pechay chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Marse Speaks chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Hmm... oookay... I think you also had a problem with tenses. I don't know. Maybe it's just me?

Anyway, this story... I think you can still improve it. I didn't like it that much, but I still appreciate your effort! :) Perhaps, it's because I've read tons of GA fanfics about these two already. I mean, you published this around 2006, and the ones that I mostly read were published around... 2008. So... yeah.

Keep safe!
Crimson.Coeur chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
LoL. The forever arrogant Natsume and the forever klutzy Mikan. xD
Shuffle Princess chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
hahaha. xD This is funny.
padrrhhajfenmak chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
: D
KazeNoSakura chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
"Gods, she's the one who keeps on tumbling, why should it be his fault if he saw her underwear?"

Haha, this line made me laugh because it's sooo true. XD She should learn to wear short underneath her skirts. Cute sone-shot, just like the other one. :D
Janelle annejanellesyyahoo chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Hey there! I liked your sequel. Really hoped that you made it longer. Well, on second thought, make it longer at you other stories. This is just really perfect. Except for some typographical errors. Well, nobody is perfect anyway. And that includes nothing is perfect. Keep making stories as good as this one. I really liked it. :p
DemonAngelGirl chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
so sweet!

it was real cute!
Air High chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I love these small stories! I find them adorable!
Echo In The Night chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
love it
aiyen chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
it's so nice... honestly, i'm so jealous of you coz' you make the nicest oneshots..
Konnichiwa Minna chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
Once again, another adorable oneshot! Don't worry, I completely understand how hard it is for Natsume to say or do nice things! Which is why I have used a little 'trick' in my fic, which no one will understand until I finish writing it. Haha, anyway, I ramble way to much! I love this oneshot, too! :D
moonliteroses394 chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Ha ha. Its funny. I like it a lot. Keep it up!, I was so blunt...
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