|Reviews for Can't Take It In|
| Queen Su chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
This is pretty good! I LOVE Can't Take It In! :)
I have a few comments though.
I spotted a few grammar mistakes and putting your authors notes in bold would help. Also, the conversation between Legolas and his father (near the top of the story) was a bit confusing because you had the song in italics too. If you would have put page breaks in between it would have been easier to read.
That's about it!
Great job! I love Legolas and Aragorn fics!
In Aslan's Name,
Queen Susan the Gentle
| Maedhros Gilthalion chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
It's a great idea for a story, really, but...Legolas? He's 2931 years old...Aragorn merely 86. The idea of using a song to implement a sotry is a good thought as well, and the lyrics fit very well into the theme of the story, I thought. Keep on writing, and good luck!