Reviews for One Last Look
willow314 chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
Hey! I like this poem. This is the kind of thing Draco would do, isn't it? Suffer by himself while what he really wants is just across the lake? Anyway, yeah. I like this. Good work. P.S. read my story.

P.P.S. I just figured out how to post on here. Yeah, I'm kinda slow.
Unicorn13 chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
*flails*

I love this! It's so simple and brief, yet poignant and intense at the same time. Awesome job! And I'm not just saying that because I'm your sister. ;-) Just one nitpicky little thing: you forgot to capitalize the last "I" in the poem. Love ya lots!

Unicorn13
CanYouLoveTheImaginary chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
AWW!That's so sad! I really love it and i really think that you convaid all the emotions you needed. It tells so much that you dont even need to know what happened before, you know the result of the end! Very powerful stuff. Even though you say you arent a writer, you do really powerful work! Once again, great story!