Reviews for A Nice Day
Andrena chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
That was an awesome fanfic! I hope you write more.
machievelli chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Supposed to have been posted 13 December 2011, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. but I had problems with my computer that literally made every document and link hidden, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'.

Post KOTOR: Carth and Revan visit Telos... sort of.

Remember to do a sight edit; I think you meant suite (Room) instead of suit, though both would pass a standard spell check. I also wondered what you meant by groggy, again I think you meant foggy.

The piece is slow and relaxing, and Carth adjusting and readjusting the climate controls for his own amusement were fun. While called slash by the author, a few seconds of editing would have made it hetero as there is little that reminds you of that fact.
Hyarou chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
This was very brilliant. Not overly romantic and perfectly sweet :)
Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
I may be in love with the way you write KOTOR slash. Possibly.
megawoman 5210 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Do you think you could do an mpreg sequel with Carth as the "mother"?
tmelange chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Okay, you are made of win. LOL Original KOTOR. Today must be my lucky day, finding this. Bravo!
Dranzen chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
Aw...what a nice story. And funny in a way, too.