Amazing story. I will stop here since I HATE reading to the end (or anywhere NEAR the end) of any incomplete story but so far this has been an amazing read. The lack of true Harry/Bella romance moments is disheartening (yet realistic) but the buildup for the pairing is certainly there. Having a REALISTIC buildup to such a pairing SHOULD have been impossible but somehow...the Author just made it work.

This isn't one of those 'Bellatrix is secretly good' or 'Harry is secretly a Dark Lord' or 'Harry meets Bella before she goes insane' stories. No, this is straight up CANON Bellatrix (insane, sadistic, etc) with mostly CANON Harry. Harry is still an impulsive Gryffindor at heart but has been hardened (and tainted) by years of war and constant loss; including the death of everyone he holds dear.

I would have thought the pairing to be impossible without some Fanon tropes thrown in but the buildup to this point suggests otherwise. A truly marvelous job by the Author.

This is fantastic!

I remember reading this year's ago, one of the few fics this old that still hold up

“This story will not be abandoned” lol

I don’t usually read unfinished fics there days out of sadness of not seeing the end, but this one? This one I had to make an exception. It’s beautiful work. I hope this review reaches you still, because you have written amazing story.

Delicious, dark, tragic. This other Hermione reviving Tom was the icing on the cake. Marvelous.
For all her talk, she’s on her way to become different kind of Bella.

Loved all the flowing action, those magic stances and the wild family magics, like Lestranges dabbling in demon arts.

I don’t remember where I heard it, but someone said that this is, (or should be), the standard when it comes to Harry and Bella fics. I’m on my third or fourth read through, and I would have to say I definitely agree with them. Sarcasm, hatred, and violence, oh so much violence! Let’s fucking gooo ooh ooo!

everyone is basically evil?

Lucius melting into a puddle! Lol. The story proper hasn't even started and I already love it.

It is a shame that you seem to have abandoned the story but it's been 12 years since it's been updated anyway it was a fantastic read although I'm not quite sure but I like the plot Arc of having the Lord Voldemort possessing a Harry body.

It was a fun read.

Damn this fic is so much fun. It‘s like one continuous John Wick action scene, with detailed magic, death and destruction. Sure, the plot is nothing special, but who cares. It‘s like a good action movie.

Fucking really? This is the biggest fuck up you could've come up with
A war veteran Harry trusting blindly is fucking retarded

This is brilliantly murderously insane. I hope the author comes back to it someday.

Damn is everybody evil?

Also this should very much be continued.

Please!

I love how you actually included techniques like the jacks and the torture, death curse, and how they were actually calculated. I also like how moody analysed the stances, because I feel like there must have been a difference between people’s stances. Best battle scene I’ve seen.

I remember now why I dropped this lol had so much potential but all the OC and weird shit that made no sense ruined it i bet author felt that way also and dropped he dun fucked he's story sad too I love Harratrix