Reviews for GirlUWant
Concolor44 chapter 9 . 4/10/2012
This story last updated more than five years ago. That is usually a pretty good indication that it has been abandoned. And now I feel abandoned, too.

It's just so freakin' good! Where the hell are all the reviews? I mean, you got, what, 14 reviews up through August of 2010 and then ZILCH thereafter? What the bloody hell? There should be twenty TIMES that many for a story of this quality!

Hmph. Nobody ever went broke underestimating the taste of the American public, that's for sure.

Okay ... look ... I'll make you a deal. You let me know where the rest of the story is going, and I'll help you in ANY WAY I CAN to pick up the reins again. Seriously. There is NO FREAKING WAY this can be allowed to lapse and die, just when it's really getting good. And you haven't even found Vic yet! Come on!

Please, please, please PM me. I really want to discuss this project. DON'T LET IT GOOOOOOO!
Concolor44 chapter 8 . 4/10/2012
Raven's "pornography" is just about one of the cutest things I've ever read! Oh my stars!

Ming Vase? Ohhhh, ouch. Yeah, I figured she'd show up sometime, just ... well ... not exactly like that. And she works at the club, too? Damn, where do I go for a membership?
Concolor44 chapter 7 . 4/10/2012
Again with the mysterious calls! What the hell? Is it Starfire? Cyborg? Someone we haven't met yet? It's driving me nuts, it is.
Concolor44 chapter 6 . 4/10/2012
Good to see that they're talking. Yeah, it'll be a LONNNG time before anything that looks like trust is returned, but I think now maybe they'll be okay. I hope.

(Who's Ming?)
Concolor44 chapter 5 . 4/10/2012
My word. You continue to surprise. And to impress.

This is one of the more telling portraits of Starfire that I have ever read. I have to say - and I can't really think of better words - that she touched me. Her selflessness in the face of others' conceit, her deep desire to help her friends and to hold them together, are so genuine here, so obviously a part of who she is, that I am literally fighting back tears. Joyous ones, that is.

This just keeps getting better.
Concolor44 chapter 3 . 4/10/2012
This just gets better and better.

I absolutely LOVE how logically you have things progressing. Actions have consequences. Personality flaws create friction. Friction will burn things up. Beautifully done. BB's take on things, in particular, I find poignant. He wants to be her hero, but can't figure out how. Sucky place to be.

Your description of Raven's new 'look' ... yeah, I had to read that over a couple of times. She's really hard to picture with pink hair. It's like she and Jinx switched places or something.

BTW, how is BB going unnoticed as an ex-Titan? Is he not still green? Does he have a holographic ring we haven't heard about? Just curious.
Concolor44 chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
So far it all makes sense. BB and Jinx have used their special "traits" to cover their tracks well, for the most part, although the Titans will have something of a bead on their direction, once Vic tracks down that last attempt to use the credit card. Giving the H.I.V.E. the distinct impression that Jinx died in the attempt to take Beast Boy was a good move, but when they are unable to find her body I think it won't take them long to figure out what really happened. They aren't staffed by idiots.

They make a cute couple, though, don't they?
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
OH-HO! You most definitely have me intrigued here! In most fics, BB doesn't get to use his abilities to their full measure, but it looks as it you've done your homework. Bravo!

Looking forward eagerly to the rest of this. Tally-ho!
Anitoon3 chapter 3 . 8/18/2010

Dang, that sucks to be going through that.

Woah, I didn't expect that to be her job...but if it pays rent, then I guess its good for them.

I wonder if the Titans are gonna get back together? With Jinx too! :)

~ Anitoon3
Anitoon3 chapter 2 . 8/18/2010

This is so cool!

Aw, Beast Boy got her a rose! .

Oh my gosh! I thought Jinx was dead! *Phew* I'm glad she isn't! :)

That car sounds cool. what does it look like?

~ Anitoon3
Anitoon3 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Hi there!

This is so awesome!

Beast Boy's so nice and sweet to Jinx! Haha, I like that he calls her birthday girl! :)

*Gasp* I thought Beast Boy was gonna be blind! I'm glad he can see now! :)

Yay! cool ending! XD

Thanks for making this! :)

~ Anitoon3
C.J.Robbins chapter 9 . 5/22/2010
YOU ARE A FABULOUS WRITER! I absolutely love this story- the sheer emotion in each chapter has made me highly addicted to it! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This story is just too good to be left unfinished!
BBJ13 chapter 7 . 4/28/2010
Hi,I got an idea.
High School Musical TEEN TITANS STYLE!
How's it sound?
Use HSM,HSM2,and HSM3!
It's awesome!
Gaberella _Jinx
Troy BoltenBeast Boy
Chad _Cyborg
Taylor _Bumblebee
Sharpay EvansRaven(I know I of ...)
Ryan EvansRobin
Kelsy(Or is it Chelsy?)_Starfire
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See the faces?
Lala Murry chapter 9 . 4/17/2007
I loved it! But thats not why I came here. Do you know how to get to JA's stories?Lala Murry.
papreclip chapter 9 . 2/21/2007
I found this story after Ch 9, and I just want to say "Very Well Done." It's a piaring I would not have thought of and I must say I'm enjoying the story alot. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thank You.
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