Reviews for Enemy of my enemy
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 27 . 11/10/2015
If you see a pair of active combatants without one of them being a dead body at the end of the scene, you've already met them in chapter one.

Hah! Nice. It was a god sbort fic overall, but could use a look through for some typos and such that have probably been unnoticed for years. They're no big deal though.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 26 . 11/10/2015
Heh, well, the merc made a good effort at least. Another typo I found:

The heavy gun slung casually over his shoulder. The gun casually over his shoulder.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 22 . 11/10/2015
Dang, I was expecting Riddick to be the one who ahocked someone, that was a nice twist from a intelligent security chief.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 17 . 11/9/2015
Hah, classic one liner. I'm almost expecting a teacup or similar kill now. Riddick taking one of the guards uniforms is a nice touch though.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 16 . 11/9/2015
Heh, that "slap" had confused me until I realized the marks would make him look like a victim.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 14 . 11/9/2015
Electrical engineer Xenomorphs. Well, crap.
Or yay, I guess.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 12 . 11/9/2015
Yeah, misunderstandings jokes are hilarious.

I actually might have found it funnier if he totally noticed the escaped alien, but was hoping they would ignore him back if he just played it chill.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 11 . 11/9/2015
I lol'd.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 10 . 11/9/2015
Huh, you'd think that would have been a point of note for the scientists. Or they thought the beast didn't eat the human because it wasn't ripe yet. Either one.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 8 . 11/9/2015
Welp, that lasted about as long as I expected. Let's see if he can get though some relationship counseling alive. The counselor that is.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 7 . 11/9/2015
Heh, I can almost imagine that blatant disregard for life for the pursuit of SCIENCE! to be understandable to Riddick. Though he prefers doing his killing for getting some peace and quiet.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 6 . 11/9/2015
Man, people just getting in your way of saying hi to a friend you haven't seen in awhile.

Poor Riddick having to deal with keycard fetch quests...
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 5 . 11/9/2015
Big cat predators always lazing about on trees, thinking they look so cool. Well, they're right.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 4 . 11/9/2015
R for Riddick of course, lol.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 2 . 11/9/2015
Predalien was badass. XenomorphFuryan would be OP.
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