Reviews for Take my Life, Not My Heart
DMSR chapter 13 . 10/15/2008
I liked the ending very much. William... I wonder who that could be. lol. ;)
La Petite Rose chapter 13 . 12/7/2007
Awesome,it was well written and was the best Ivy x Siegefried story I ever read.
Manly Man chapter 13 . 9/12/2007
That's so sad... *sniff*



To be honest, though, I really did like it. You oughta write a few full size romance novels; I bet they would be great.
La Petite Rose chapter 2 . 4/11/2007
Is it too late to review?I stumbled over this fic,it's pretty good. I can't check out the other chapters but I will later

P.s.- this is my first time ever reading a Siegfried and Ivy fic.
heaven-monument chapter 13 . 1/5/2007

This has to be the best piece of writing I have seen in my entire life.

Wins the Heaven-Monument award for Outstanding Achievements in the Field of Excellence.

786157631.125/10 and Faved. You're faved, too. You deserve a medal.
Rexnos chapter 13 . 12/23/2006
An excellent tale of romance, but it seems a little out of character to me... A little to emo for my tastes as well...

Seems to me that either party could have sworded their way to the other. That certainly would have made for an interesting tale. It would have been enjoyable to read about how Ivy plowed through ranks and ranks of the queen's guard to reach Siegfried. Vice versa works as well.

All the same, it's your story and it was certainly excellent, though emo.


scfan chapter 13 . 8/23/2006
I loved it!
Kiss-and-Make-Love chapter 13 . 6/28/2006

Finally finished, and I love it. I'm not sure what to say, because the last few chapters are just as beautifully written and intensely emotional as the first ones. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.

Congratulations on a piece well done!
Psychoblue chapter 13 . 6/26/2006
Hm...guess they won't be coming back for SC4...
SmashToPieces chapter 13 . 6/25/2006
You...are awesome.

*salute* OOH-WAH-AH-AH-AH!

-The Stricken One
SmashToPieces chapter 12 . 6/25/2006

-The Stricken One
SmashToPieces chapter 11 . 6/24/2006

Go on, please! I'm jumping up & down like a maniac!

-The Stricken One
Kiss-and-Make-Love chapter 10 . 6/22/2006
Wow. Awesome plot twists-I didn't see Mary's motivation coming at all. The second interlude is fantastic, as well; the reference back to a previous chapter is clever, as is the definition of the conium genus at the beginning.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this :o)
Kiss-and-Make-Love chapter 5 . 6/21/2006
I haven't finished reading it yet, so I'll probably leave another review once I'm done, but just a little bit of constructive criticism:

For such a serious work, phrases like "what all" take away from the tone of the narration. It obviously isn't that big of a deal, but I just thought I'd point that out for ya' ;o)

Other than that, it's beautifully written, and I love the idea of Ivy and Siegfried. I can't wait to finish this :o)
SmashToPieces chapter 10 . 5/26/2006
LOL sounds like something Merry and Pippin would sing, expect the last line. PLEASE CONTINUE!

-The Stricken One
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