Reviews for Our Avalon, Their Eden
Sennethe chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
Did I miss where she actually opens the door? That might be intentional though, to show her distraction. Plenty of really good, colorful, intense descriptions. Maybe too many? One right after another. I thought it was a little overwhelming... Ah! Like her state of mind again?
Stylus Known chapter 1 . 4/17/2006

Really good, great writing style

Keep going! Can't wait for an update.
FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 4/17/2006

where can I find THAT door?

I want in.
KHSsSoccerGurl chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Hey, I'm liking the story so far, plz update and make the chapters longer! Great begining though!