|Reviews for Fox Magic|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/24
Nice one, love the interaction between the characters.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/24
Wow, didn't see that coming. Loving the story so far.
| AdriftUponASeaOfTime chapter 20 . 2/14
*breaks the internet*
NO! If you're going to write a fic and not update it on 3 years, at least make it really crappy, so no one minds. I'm appealing to your inner fangirl here. This is officially categorized in the mental folder of 'Is Freaking Amazing But Will Probably Never Be Updated In This Lifetime'.
I REFUSE to accept this. You get your butt back here and finish this fic, dear author, or I will personally set whatever is possessing Orochimaru on you.
| Kumori-Neko chapter 20 . 1/20
I just read all 20 chapters in two days! I was captivated by the plot, how you implemented the AU and the dialogue? To die for3 (Seriously, my teacher nearly killed me for reading in class) Are there any plans to continue this story once more?
| Acier Glace chapter 20 . 1/15
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I really love reading this story. I revisit it every so often, not in hopes of an update I'm not needy for that, but because I love this entire storyline so much! I love that the demons are actual demons, with histories that tie into myth and legend, with obvious and evident personalities, even when blended into their canon character, it's so vibrantly your creation. I love the sub-plots with Orochimaru and the Konoha-nin. The possibilities you've written into this story always inspire me to reflect on my own writing and give it that twist to make it real and alive. I find something to laugh at and worry over every time I read it. You've done a really great job making this story work. That's pretty much all of the gushing I have, no real criticism to offer. I just wanted to say thanks for posting this story and keeping it up.
| Jileine chapter 20 . 1/13
So I see, this story has bee abandoned long ago... yet still, an amazing piece of work! I am going to forever miss the never-happening continuation. For instance, I always wondered what Sasuke's reaction to the news that it was Naruto who convinced Itachi to go massacre the Uchiha would be. Would he still wish to free Naruto just to never see him again? Or would he be able to forgive Naruto? What about all the gods? Ah, the plot, it's even more intriguing than the romantic line. Is there any teeny-tiny chance that you will continue this story?
| anon chapter 20 . 1/12
I hope you will continue your story someday. You have an interesting plot going. :)
| anon chapter 17 . 1/10
Hi there! A few quick issues I noticed reading up to this point:
1. Tsunade used Kyuubi's cover name - Naruto - without having been told what it was first.
2. In regard to the chakra-transfer thing that Naruto and Sasuke have going on: How would Kyuubi have pulled that off with previous owners? I don't think any Uchiha before Sasuke would allow it to happen, given how hostile all of the relationships have been between the Uchihas and Kyuubi until Sasuke came along.
(I'm trying to be helpful, since you seem to be okay with people pointing out issues in your writing - hope you don't mind.)
| Shukoka chapter 20 . 12/18/2013
Sigh, unexpected cut off but love a good story line. You really shaped these characters as if they were yours to begin with. It wouldn't take much to change them a bit and create a story completely your own if you wanted. Different names and detailed character development from the get go and WALAH!... book by you. Just add some full steamy sex scenes :3
| Akiros chapter 20 . 11/29/2013
I love this story! I understand the whole real life thing. It sucks when you don't have enough time to type up your stories. Please update soon though! Keep writing!
| luvthesea17 chapter 20 . 10/16/2013
what. no. it can't just end here. just. no. D:
you really need to update this story ーit's just so fucking /amazing/.
This is my first ever Yaoi fanfic I've read, and considering the fact that I usually don't enjoy reading it, it's probably the /only/ Yaoi fanfic I'll ever read. I'm just. Heartbroken.
This story makes /sense/. The relationship between Sasuke and Naruto seems natural and has reason behind it. It explains how Sasuke is still sort of asexual but gets turned on by naruto due to the power and intensity. And Naruto is attracted to Sasuke for being different and since it isn't as unusual for male & male relationships from the time period he's used to.
Your humor is so fan-fucking-tastic. It's actually /funny/. I applaud you for this.
I sincerely hope this is updated again soon- so much potential! And we're just starting to get into the more intense parts D:
Definitely going on my favorites list.
Your annoying fan,
| Sakura117 chapter 20 . 10/11/2013
Great story , love this version of Naruto, I hope you will continue someday :)
| Killua17 chapter 20 . 8/21/2013
Don't touch that ball Orochi DON'T YOU DARE!
Do us all a favor and DIE!
...sorry I have issues with Orochimaru.
| seireidoragon chapter 20 . 8/12/2013
I really hope you haven't abandoned this story as I absolutely love it! The humor is well written and actually funny, the characters are interesting and their interactions are awesome, and I want to know what happens! Please update soon!
| VampirePrinssess chapter 20 . 8/10/2013
Shadow- please oh please continue this