Reviews for A Khaki Day
Unknown Cupcake chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
I can honestly say that this is the best 6teen fanfic story i have ever read! I look forward to reading more of your stories.
anon chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
simple and sweet :) i like it
AsnGothic chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Love the subtlety; it's nicely written and very poetic. I agree that it's a good beginning, but a little empty as a one-shot.
Miss-Frenchie chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
. i like it.
cRACKER jACK chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
yawn...your 52 words over
qwart chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
ok... i don't really get it...
Dace chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
O! I like this. It is a great idea. I may have to try one, if that's okay of course. Maybe not in 6teen though. Probably in POTC or Tamora Pierce under the Keladry of Mindelan Series. Anywhoo, I loved. It is a great idea! Maybe a higher maximum for words (like 150 or 200) would add more room fro description, but most definantly not needed!
BookJunkie chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
This is one of the best beginnings of stories that I've read! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love how you really focused on Jonesy and how he feels. D Update soon!
HoneyGoddess57 chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
*Yawn*,sorry girl,it's kind of boring,sorry,next time it won't be boring!
nature's soul chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
this looks really good keep writing!