Reviews for The Broken Path
orchid14 chapter 1 . 2/9
Nice story 3 I love Kaoru-chan!
A Midsummer chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
It should have been a hilarious crack except it managed to be serious enough to be the usual Kenshin drama. I commend you for that.
seikkyokuka chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
This was great haha. Especially when she burst into tears!
Meiyo no Ko chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Author-san,
Very nice work! Clueless Kenshin, as always-Or is he?!

Thank you for sharing your work, and may God bless you,

Meiyo
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Go Kaoru!

brittney
S chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
This was a great read! Very in character
Bread-Making-Viking chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Oooh, that was good! Very detailed.
ChristinaAngel chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
I liked how Kenshin and Kaoru fought to get back to each other and it was interesting to see how circumstances conspired against Kaoru with the boy and the letter but Kenshin still came to her rescue even if he didn't know he was.
older and amused chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
oh i love it _ :) well done :D
SRAS9 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Very good story! Good work!
Erroneously chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
I loved this line: "Kaoru proved that she was in control of the situation by bursting into tears."

Some people seem to manage fine when it's stressful, and then breakdown afterwards. Perhaps a kind of survival instinct?

Anyway, I really enjoyed this. Thanks :D
FenixPhoenix chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Nice. I enjoy this. It's good that you showed Kaoru's strenght.
Brukaoru chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Nice oneshot. :D
Kawaii-KeKe-Chan chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Yes! This is the Kaoru we know and love, not some simmering dim wit that so many authors portray her as! And bless Kenshin, coming to find her because it was raining. He's such a little sweetie! I'm glad Kaoru kicked ass! A very enjoyable read! Kudos and thanks! .
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Aw XD That was so sweet XD

ARi chan
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