Reviews for The Gates of Hell
MobMotherScitah chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
I like both endings in strange ways. They're so awkward with one another! AND IT'S FRIGGIN IMPOSSIBLE to find any OC stories! *Huff* Thank you for making this! I was getting all mopey for a while.

Scitah
Spaugs chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Wow, I love the fact that you wrote two endings. They were both so good I can't decide which I like more!
Lili009 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Very good story, I love how you work with OCs!
baba chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
good story. jesse was a good character,i'm glad spike made it back to her in the alternate ending.
WolfDaughter chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Can I just say 'woah!' That's quite a story and one I think I rather like. :-) Jesse was quite real and you did a great job with her background and emotions. My only suggestion to you would be to check your grammar and spelling. You have some things like 'limps' instead of 'limbs' and 'she was preoccupied she had gone too far.' Preoccupied doesn't really fit there. 'Worried' or 'concerned' would be better.