Reviews for The Lucky One
VogueThousand chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I just wanted to cry when I read this !
many-themiles chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Fuck, you made me cry! It's amazing, I love it so much! It's def one of the best stories i've ever read! :D
Albertt chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
still have goosebumps...
firestorm13 chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
*sniffle* Oh damn, that was just so sad.
El Gringo Loco chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
A beautiful job with a most sensitive subject.
Missy Holland chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
i..well, I don't know what to say...I really don't...

Loves,

Missy
icklebitodd chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
BITCH!

I managed with 'Smiles' not to cry I found the humour I was blissfully ignorant of the envitable.

You made me cry! Me! Cry!

This one is even more heart rendering than the 'Smiles' the observations more personal insightful. Even down to the very funny 'black shirt mystery' and the use of 'plague-infested monkey factory' its a new one my History teacher uses 'your as much use as a drunken monkey chocolate factory' but hey them monkeys really have got a bad name for themselves.

The final paragraph utterly briliant no other words are needed

Loved it and am being to forgive you but still think you need to go and get your head examined for killing her.
EmilyMayVTheCrazyDinosaurGirl chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
wicked
Halfpipechick247 chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
This was soo sad...but good...a good tear jerker romance fic! yep i loved smiles and this one...there both soo good..sorry my reviews arent really constructive...
Tha Gurl Next Door chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Do u enjoy making me cry? and y am i alwayz on the fone with my sister wenever i read ur stories that make me cry? i think she's starting to think i need counceling.

But it was very beautiful.

(PS) Whats wrong with plague-infested monkeys?