|Reviews for Incomplete Revenge|
| Amy chapter 1 . 3/21
The writing was good; but I have problem with how you wrote about Sara. To me, it's extremely OOC for one, and if she were as depressed as you made her out to be, she would and should have been taken off active duty. Sorry, I have to stopay from going any further.
| GSRGeeklover chapter 2 . 5/13/2006