Reviews for Inner Secrets
Shikigami-Sama chapter 1 . 6/11
It's good but... You've made him cool for a civilian not a ninja and the changes don't suit his personality. If you'd made him more badass it would have been fine but as it is he's got a fierce appearance and a weak attitude. His wardrobe doesn't fit really mesh well with the story type. Ninjas can't have rings and necklaces on in battle/training/missions as they get caught on things and attract attention. The ear piercings are ok but three in one ear and none in the other makes it feel unbalanced also an eyebrow piercing really doesn't suit naruto. I like that you've tried to make him look cooler but you've gone about it the wrong way. The change was to drastic. Instead of doing all this in one night it should have been that he'd already had the tattoos and maybe the ear piercings and had just hidden them with his hair. It might just be me but I also think him having two large tattoos is too much, a couple of small ones or one big one would have been better and maybe further down the track he could have gotten more because of some important event that happened etc.
key chapter 7 . 3/19
Neji is sooooo gay
Key chapter 2 . 3/19
naruto second life is problably a boy band witht he outfit and pircings he got
nekolovesyou chapter 22 . 1/28
love it please update
Hardpointz chapter 22 . 1/25
Best damn story I've ever read
Jamiechan chapter 22 . 12/16/2016
Can you please update soon I really enjoy reading this fanfic. I can't wait to see more romance between naruto and itachi. I'll be waiting .
Gabby-Hunter chapter 5 . 10/9/2016
Naruto will not willing give up his head band after going through so much trouble to get and keep it
narutofanficlov321 chapter 22 . 8/24/2016
Amazing u had everything in there and is completely amazing I have no words hope u keep writing
tunasalad chapter 1 . 7/13/2016
I was seriously questioning Naruto's fashion sense in the first chapter but then I remembered that this was written in 2006 xD
YomoYouko chapter 6 . 6/3/2016
didn't you do the icha icha paradise already?
D chapter 17 . 3/8/2016
honestly got bored 2 chapters ago. can't identify what it is about the story that made it that way. writing is good and has a good premise though its long its not overly dreary. I think it may be that the power level shown early made advancement a bit of nothing. Yes you had some decent battles but it was almost a foregone conclusion that the "hero" would win or at least survive. Honestly with the main focus being on adventure/action it leaves progress bogged on character development. Other than that I guess I can not tell what has made the story boring to me but I feel as though there's more to it that I'm missing. Anyway good luck on your next piece.
briskd chapter 7 . 12/23/2015
Aww the Neji and Naruto moment had me melting in a puddle of goo
Titania1796 chapter 22 . 8/11/2015
actualiza pronto quieres e Itachi ya sabe que lo expulsaron de los Akatsuki puedes hacer mpreg con ItaNaru son mi pareja favorita
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 22 . 8/9/2015
NNOOOOO TT-TT CRYING FOR THE NO CHAPATERS I SEE NOT AHEAD OF ME.. hehe sorry caps lol! But anyway love the story darn we just hit the top of Itaichs and Narutos love sigh oh well. Hopefully waiting for more! Bye for now :D
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 18 . 8/9/2015
Noted that I love your story and love the build up to the love and Neji-kun with the hole gift thing to Naruto just to cute! :D I love Itachi-kun and Shikamaru-san and even Naruto-san, and Saskue-san :D YOU picked my favs all in one! Along with Gaara-kun, :D Just to name a few. Love the build up :D There was parts I wish expand more, but I love the Time skips I with you with the hole misty to the age thing adds to the plot :D Not knowing is what makes it a fun to see what happens next great job! Now on to my reading :D
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