Reviews for Second Chance
SortingHat chapter 9 . 10/28/2017
I'm not sure if your trying to go the serious approach but it doesn't come across that way but it seems this is a sarcastic fanbase so anything useful I have to say will just be (white noise) so I am not bothering to review this fic.
Calmzone1 chapter 23 . 5/1/2017
Good story.
Dark Lord Potter Black chapter 16 . 1/31/2017
Its a really badly written fic...
langeline chapter 4 . 9/16/2016
I like yr story and time-line adaptations.
langeline chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Who's N.A.T?
TeaLovingShrineMaiden chapter 2 . 9/10/2016
You have a very direct approach to writing. That's not exactly a bad thing, but most people don't really take events such as the ones you've been writing in your story in stride quite so easily.
Mayflowers123 chapter 6 . 12/21/2015
OI! I'm Slytherin!
Ezmerelda chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
Ok, right off the bat I have to point out that wary means to be careful of something, and weary is to be very tired. Using weary in place of wary is a very common mistake. Differentiate yourself from mediocre writers and learn the difference.
wandamarie chapter 23 . 3/2/2015
Wow it was a great ending thanks
wandamarie chapter 22 . 3/2/2015
Nice job thanks
wandamarie chapter 21 . 3/2/2015
Loving the out line thank you
wandamarie chapter 20 . 3/2/2015
Great chapter
wandamarie chapter 19 . 3/2/2015
Oh holly poo it great acttion thanks
wandamarie chapter 18 . 3/2/2015
Oh my great story and chapter
wandamarie chapter 17 . 3/2/2015
Oh holly cow Getting good. Thanks
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