Reviews for Harry Potter Fate's Child: A Destiny Revisited
lokixnightmare chapter 28 . 22h
i love the story there is so much cemetery
Jharry1960 chapter 9 . 11/26
Why did you bother if you couldn't bring yourself to change the easiest, most obvious thing to change?
Jharry1960 chapter 3 . 11/26
So much for Harry "near genius". With any being capable of attacking a predator in defense of their young, they are much more fierce if the predator is successful in abducting the offspring. Good story, again.
blcoachmac chapter 33 . 9/19
I can’t see the people especially since the majority are half blood or muggle born accepting this! There would be blood in the streets!
blcoachmac chapter 28 . 9/18
How does Umbitch stay as High Inquisitor?
blcoachmac chapter 27 . 9/18
Take out Umbitch with extreme prejudice!
blcoachmac chapter 26 . 9/18
Kill his followers! Make them fear for once!
blcoachmac chapter 25 . 9/18
Take the fight to the criminals! Deadly force is authorized!
blcoachmac chapter 18 . 9/18
Now, Harry just needs to sharpen up his spells, and he’ll be a match for Voldemort in his death munchkin’s!
blcoachmac chapter 16 . 9/18
Ron is gonna have to be eliminated at some point, he is a predator in disguise! Ginny is a stalker, who needs to b reigned in!
blcoachmac chapter 2 . 9/17
Harry should have left no doubt he wanted nothing else to do with the jealous asshole!
Guest chapter 42 . 6/24
So Harry and Hermione have all the time in the world to swap spit and play with Umbridge cause it's not like anyone is waiting for rescue.
Anakan88 chapter 1 . 5/16
hate that he lost his memory that's just stupid
wiebenor chapter 52 . 5/4
Very good story... Can't wait to check out the sequel, and I hope it's finished as well...

Keep up the good work, and keep improving your writing (as everyone makes mistakes) seriously, you did good with this story...
wiebenor chapter 3 . 5/2
Just started reading this story, and besides the first chapter which didn't feel like a good "beginning" of the story, to me at least, the story has been good so far... Please note that there's not really anything wrong with the first chapter, it's just that for some reason I couldn't get into the story much, until the 2nd chapter.

One thing I'll say about the 3rd chapter though, is that the horntail scene just feels different than it should... IDK if it's how short it seems, or, if it's the fact that he got life threatening injuries in the scene,(also given how short it feels) as I've read plenty of stories with a version of the horntail scene in it, and I don't usually have the "lack of feeling" I get here, but I do still think that this story is capable of keeping my interest...

Good work so far...
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