Reviews for Harry Potter Fate's Child: A Destiny Revisited |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i love the story there is so much cemetery |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did you bother if you couldn't bring yourself to change the easiest, most obvious thing to change? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much for Harry "near genius". With any being capable of attacking a predator in defense of their young, they are much more fierce if the predator is successful in abducting the offspring. Good story, again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can’t see the people especially since the majority are half blood or muggle born accepting this! There would be blood in the streets! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How does Umbitch stay as High Inquisitor? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Take out Umbitch with extreme prejudice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kill his followers! Make them fear for once! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Take the fight to the criminals! Deadly force is authorized! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now, Harry just needs to sharpen up his spells, and he’ll be a match for Voldemort in his death munchkin’s! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron is gonna have to be eliminated at some point, he is a predator in disguise! Ginny is a stalker, who needs to b reigned in! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should have left no doubt he wanted nothing else to do with the jealous asshole! |
![]() ![]() So Harry and Hermione have all the time in the world to swap spit and play with Umbridge cause it's not like anyone is waiting for rescue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hate that he lost his memory that's just stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story... Can't wait to check out the sequel, and I hope it's finished as well... Keep up the good work, and keep improving your writing (as everyone makes mistakes) seriously, you did good with this story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just started reading this story, and besides the first chapter which didn't feel like a good "beginning" of the story, to me at least, the story has been good so far... Please note that there's not really anything wrong with the first chapter, it's just that for some reason I couldn't get into the story much, until the 2nd chapter. One thing I'll say about the 3rd chapter though, is that the horntail scene just feels different than it should... IDK if it's how short it seems, or, if it's the fact that he got life threatening injuries in the scene,(also given how short it feels) as I've read plenty of stories with a version of the horntail scene in it, and I don't usually have the "lack of feeling" I get here, but I do still think that this story is capable of keeping my interest... Good work so far... |