|Reviews for Sparks|
| odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
That was some great reading. Loved the story_~
| randomguy1517 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
HAHAHAHHAHAHAH THE PHONE RANG
| Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
dam phone! ug, why did the phone have to ring?
| D-chi chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
lolz. Trish is so fierce.
| Brukaoru chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Short but cute and well written! :D
| destructo888 chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
HAHA. Great story.
"She was being very in his face. And it wasn’t her face that was in his face"
Great line haha
| JaneGray chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Finally I could read it _
I really liked it, I can definitely see Trish getting fed up with Dante's "honor" and taking the matter in her hands )
| Dark Manifest chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
"She was being very in his face. And it wasn’t her face
that was in his face."
Excuse me, I'll be over here, laughing my ass off.
The rest was cute. Count on Trish to tell it like it is, and Dante to go with the flow. I do love it when she maneuvers herself into his lap.
Criticism-wise, the dialogue seemed a little unnatural around the point Dante was verbally listing his reasons to get with Trish. I was imagining him with a checklist, going, 'Hot - pro. Created by archenemy - con. Looks like mom - con. Is not actually mom - pro. Really hot - still a pro.' Which I assume wasn't the desired effect.
But otherwise, I enjoyed. My inner 'shipper was happy.