|Reviews for Original Sin|
| skaye chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
This looks like it has a lot of promise. Original and quite moving. Good job, keep it up.
| Kixyelle chapter 4 . 6/8/2006
such a cliffie you left. so please update soon!
| EarmuffedAmazon chapter 3 . 5/2/2006
" I Love the Al Bhed! But I Am Of Course Slightly Confused...But Having Lenne Part of Yevon's Family, intresting approach! "I mean come on, Cloud runs a delivery service and lives above a bar with Tifa and two little kids. Just THINK of the possibilities:)" THis is Only too True! lol
| EarmuffedAmazon chapter 2 . 5/2/2006
Even if I Have Nothing to Say? Well. I'm Offended. I Always Have Something to Say. *grin* Cool Story. Of Course I am, However Unable to Answer Your Trivia Questions...Perhaps I Can Take the Test Later? Like When Yiwen Can Help Me Cheat? lol
| Kixyelle chapter 2 . 4/22/2006
This was a great chapter! I love this fic so much! _
| Kixyelle chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
I like this story! I wanna know what will happen real bad! Update fast!