Reviews for City of Love
kendall chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
OH MY GOSH!

please, oh please, continue! you are a great writer i have to say, although you should check over it a little. a few times through out this little passage you replaced the with they.

but please, please, please continue!

you really did a great job.

-jade lacuna
Assimbya chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
Wow. The last line is what really got me. For all that this story seems as thought it's starting out quite happily, it's really very tragic. We can only hope that perhaps one day Walter will find out about the 'pretty girl who looked like Laura'.