|Reviews for Shades of Grey|
| Coryx chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
...Wait, this is Hohenheim's POV, right? Unless Ed had a kid, and named it after himself... I never understood that. Naming your kid after yourself, I mean. Because, assuming you're married (not always a given in fanfiction 0.o) How are you ever supposed to know who your husband/wife is talking to?
Anyway. I'm assuming it's Hohenheim's POV... So why isn't he in the main character thingy? Just wondering.
Character assignations and tangents aside... I likes. Very much. All... philosophical-y... Good! Very good!
| Lieyan chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
The beginning was a bit confusing, but it's good overall... I finally see an insight into Hohenheim's thinking! Yesh!
| momiji-k chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
There is one MAJOR problem with this... who is this about? This story means nothing to me because you don't know who is talking or who they are talking about. There is some good stuff here, but it could be just about anyone in FMA or any other anime for that matter.
I think if you give it an identity you would have an even better piece of writing here. :)