Reviews for Not A Team
The Check Mark chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
A very good story, but not very long

Try expanding on what you have here, and it could be a really good story
Bloodclaw chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
wow that was probably the shortest fic ive ever read
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
That makes a a lot of sense. I like the way you wrote it, each of their thougts followed by the Snake nin
Sheo Darren chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Somehow I find the entire scene morbidly funny.

You're definitely the master of this kind of fic. Short, straight to the point and quite entertaining while at it. And surprisingly deep, too.

Great work.
YATTE chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
KAWAII! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE !
Azamiko chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
...That jerk...
The Violent Tomboy chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
Awe...that is so sad...I feel sorry for what he did to them.