|Reviews for Not A Team|
| The Check Mark chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
A very good story, but not very long
Try expanding on what you have here, and it could be a really good story
| Bloodclaw chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
wow that was probably the shortest fic ive ever read
| Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
That makes a a lot of sense. I like the way you wrote it, each of their thougts followed by the Snake nin
| Sheo Darren chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Somehow I find the entire scene morbidly funny.
You're definitely the master of this kind of fic. Short, straight to the point and quite entertaining while at it. And surprisingly deep, too.
| YATTE chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
KAWAII! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE !
| Azamiko chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
| The Violent Tomboy chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
Awe...that is so sad...I feel sorry for what he did to them.