Reviews for The Exile
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29/2016
This is a really good story. Keep writing!
tasheika.conley chapter 4 . 5/16/2016
I really like this story I hope you will continue it.
lishymorgan chapter 4 . 12/22/2015
coolchick87 chapter 4 . 8/13/2015
I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks.
caiomorino chapter 4 . 7/1/2015
i would like to see more of this.
nonamecookie chapter 3 . 6/10/2015
i think the story is a bit rushed. there i not a lot of description. you should slow it down a bit
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2/2015
More more more more please please please please
mirian chapter 4 . 11/21/2014
por favor actualiza pronto llevas aƱos y no dejes que Sasuke muera por favor
StrongGuy159 chapter 4 . 7/29/2014
Awesome story continue please.
Rinneganuser1 chapter 2 . 2/14/2014
Um I am confused at this if the village is in lightning country and has a kage wouldn't she be the fourth raikage instead of the fourth hokage seeing as how the hokage is in the land of fire and the raikage is in the land of lightning and being hokage in the land of lightning is unheard of cause hokage means fire shadow while raikage means lightning shadow just thought you should edit it to raikage or some other one oh why not name it the kamikage seeing as how kamikage is a short version of thunder shadow but it's up to you just please don't keep it hokage cause you might get flamers and it is to confusing to deal with 2 hokages
TheBigBadWolf101 chapter 4 . 5/17/2013
Lady Michiko chapter 4 . 5/17/2013
AkaneGurung chapter 4 . 1/27/2013
Loved it I can't wait for the 5 chapter
Boppolop.hime chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
I like your story! I really hope sasuke doesn't die!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/30/2012
cool story, can't wait for the next chapter
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