|Reviews for her last breath|
| venus-aurr chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
I lyk it...though its very sad!
ONLY 2 REVIEWS! WATS WRONG WIT THESE PPL! cant they tell wen there's a nice story/poem around...
I luved it...
| Nubia chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
nope i don't hate it. It was good. Great job! I like your rhyming pattern. nice poem
| Lamanth chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
I liked it, but no guy is worth that, not even Kai. It’s still a good poem through. Keep up the good work, and please write more. lol see ya